The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The map below provides a comparison of the appearance of the airport's site before and after its refurbishment in the next year.
By comparing the present day and the following day of the airport area, certain alterations are noteworthy. From an overall perspective, it is apparent that the airport will expand more service spots and open more gates for clients.
According to the data on the airport's map, it is evident that the departure zone at the present day just merely consists of the café shop to the right of the upper corner and the check-in area which is in the opposite direction of the café. However, no services exist in the arrivals area. After the redevelopment, the bag drop service appeared in the departures area while the check-in make way for the café's location, and the café store is moved to the left of the lower corner. Moreover, the café, ATM, and car hire service will newly appear in the arrivals area after the redecoration.
Nevertheless, the security passport control and passport control customs remain unchanged over the development and shops will be located among the security passport control area. At the present day, there are simply eight gates and two walkways which are situated in gate one and gate three. After the reconstruction, the airport will have more than double gates when compared with today's numbers, and instead of using the walkway machine, customers will be transported by the sky train which will be located in the central of the waiting lounge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...café. However, no services exist in the arrivals area. After the redevelopment, the bag ...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...t, the bag drop service appeared in the departures area while the check-in make way for th...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cafés'' or 'café's'?
Suggestion: cafés'; café's
...rea while the check-in make way for the cafés location, and the café store is moved t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...r hire service will newly appear in the arrivals area after the redecoration. Neverthel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94094488189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61977923239 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9726552602 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17034829423 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719367850976 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826375345842 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132916301443 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917304196996 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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