Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some experts suggest that college professors are the best teachers, as most of them have advanced degrees and are trained thoroughly before becoming a teacher. However, I disagree, as being more educated and having specific training does not make you a better teacher. I firmly believe that parents make the best teachers because parents are the first teacher the child grows with and they care for their children way more than professors or school teachers, and this love develops into better teachings and values imparted to their kids.
Firstly, all parents have gone through a childhood which was similar to their kids as the values and upbringing which was taught by the children’s grandparents is usually carry-forwarded into young ones. With this knowledge, parents usually have a much better understanding of how and what to teach their kids. For example, my grandmother taught my mother how to cook scrumptious meals when she was a teenager, and not only did she turn out to be a fantastic cook, but also taught me some of the dishes. Since she taught me the exact recipes and methods to cook those dishes, I can easily make those dishes without any mistakes. No other culinary chef in the world would be able to teach me these dishes, as well as my mother, taught me.
Secondly, parents have supernatural instincts about their children which make them far better judges than any teacher. For instance, my father can judge exactly when I’m lying and talks me into telling the truth, and makes me realize my mistakes faster. Any teacher would just scold me or far worse, not even realize if I was lying. Parents can impart wisdom in a way that is unparalleled to any lecturer speaking in a lecture hall.
Lastly, parents are our best friends, as when can talk to them about any problem and they will always have the solution and correct advice for us. For example, when I was thirteen years old and got suspended from school for misbehaving, I was extremely scared to tell anyone. But when I told my parents about it, instead of scolding me or punishing me for my actions, they gave me good advice and gave me a solution, which was to apologize to my teacher. My heart felt lighter when I apologized to my teacher and promised her never to do it again.
Arguing about who is a better teacher, whether a learned professor from a fancy college or one’s parent is always going to remain a complex issue. Nevertheless, I contend that parents are far better teachers than anybody in the world. They are our best friends, have instincts towards their children, and have wisdom that they have gotten from their own experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 485, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...be a fantastic cook, but also taught me some of the dishes. Since she taught me the exact r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79649890591 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51822216268 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507658643326 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9844005827 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.368421053 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0526315789 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117539304391 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459887936777 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382244091951 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788257836223 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459719072506 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.