College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
College students possess high energy and vigour among themselves. They are the literally the future of mankind in the coming years and limiting their abilities in the basis of availability of jobs is absurd. If this were true, all college students would pick similar fields of study irrespective of their ability and talent towards that field but only to get a "job". I disagree with the statement that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that particular field.
The aptitude of a student towards a particular field will never be tested if only a mere job was the end goal. This would be because the person would be behind a job rather than exploring the fields. For example if a student is interested in Finance and Economics but since the jobs are limited in that field, he/she decides to study engineering which isn't her primary choice but the availability of jobs is ample. Hence, he/she sacrifices her talent towards her interest and runs behind a job which he/she may or may not get.
A person must understand that a "job" isn't the final goal, if you're good at something from that start you should aspire that field and do well in it. If you are confident and capable enough you'll land a job irrespective of the availability or maybe even start something of your own. For example, if a student who is exceptional at computer science and coding. He could easily create a software or an app that will earn himself an awful lot of money or since this issue is job specific, land a very good job with a high pay.
Of course the availability of job is a major concern in most of the fields today, but leaving your interests behind and going after a job that solely rest on uncertainty isn't the best option. If you're good at something and you pursue it, it will automatically result in success irrespective of the situation. Even though success may come sooner or later, we should focus on becoming capable rather than running after success.
To conclude this essay I must say that going after jobs isn't the answer. Achieving your dreams through your passion is the answer, a job may get you only so far in your life but a fiery passion for your interests will get you further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6725 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60935696102 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3749836659 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.941176471 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417199766474 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147360974607 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185599606901 0.0758088955206 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237271790912 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207054872331 0.0667264976115 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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