Which of the following measures would make a city safer?
①Hiring more police officers and getting them properly trained to serve the public
②Increasing the number of rehab facilities to help people quit using illegal drugs
③Improving educational facilities to prevent children from dropping out of school
When it comes to the security of modern society, many people believe that the Police Bureau should really consider hiring more police officers to serve the public. Not being careful in our daily life is a huge error. Well, I believe that first of the three options is more helpful in making the city safer.
First things first, police officers help maintain order and peace. Take thievery as an example. Can you prevent thievery from happening? No of course not! However, if police officers go on duty, such things will get more and more rare. Well I am not saying that things will never happen, but as a symbol of security, police officers can handle the situation efficiently. However, if you take a look at the two options, they are really no use. Are every single people sick every day to eat drugs? No of course not! In addition, in China specifically, dropping schools are very rare. Dropping schools are not in accord to our will.
Second, police officers can ensure our lives to be safe ones. They have the opportunity to save lives. You often find yourself in states where you can save someone's life. It might be a life-and-death situation, maybe like pulling a victim out of a crashed car, or providing first aid and life support to a shooting victim. However, other than these obvious examples, your mere presence might save countless lives. Every speedy train you ride, every incident of extreme violence you respond to, every fight you break up, are all worth it, at least to the police officers.
Last but not least, the police officers are choice makers. One of the most satisfying part of working as an officer is the opportunity of showing these addicts, gangs, or thieves a better way. We all have in mind the lists of heroic deeds they’ve done every single day, and we must support them. They are the true role models in the modern society.
All in all, I personally support the first option. We have the police. These are the people that bring peace, safety, and order.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...an you prevent thievery from happening? No of course not! However, if police offic...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...gle people sick every day to eat drugs? No of course not! In addition, in China sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, really, second, so, well, at least, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7150997151 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2897831323 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569800569801 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1338958986 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.04 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153280523623 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388376146904 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537812726317 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087979945566 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730512311113 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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