Which of the following measures would make a city safer?
①Hiring more police officers and getting them properly trained to serve the public
②Increasing the number of rehab facilities to help people quit using illegal drugs
③Improving educational facilties to prevent children from dropping out of school
Betting on the future
The three most effective ways to make a city safer for people are enforce police power, increase rehab facility and increasing school to prevent dropouts. Among the three ways, I think the last one will be the best for the city.
Firstly, enriching the student’s knowledge can allow them to protect themselves in the future. By going to school, students not only will learn professional knowledge, but also will learn what’s right and wrong. By doing this, once these students steps into the society, they will be a well-educated people. This can help them defend themselves through most attacks because the citizens will know how to respond to them. And as long as the people are good, the city is good.
Secondly, it will eliminate the problem by it’s source. Face the fact, most cities aren’t safe, not because of outside factors, but the corruption in the city. In the 21st century, terrorists attack and other sort of invasion aren’t very common. What really matters is the small problems such as stealing in the city. By educating more people, we can at least make sure the next generation won’t do these kind of things. Most schools will also open classes about special cases, such as ‘what to do when facing drugs’ which and reinsure the safety.
Some people might say that just stop students from dropping out of school isn’t enough and might not work in a short amount of time. However, the other two ways also has their flaw. The most obvious thing is that the source of the danger is not gone. Arresting some criminals and some dragster isn’t enough. In some ways, school is also a place to prevent the dropouts from causing troubles in the society. Also, comparing the three, reconstructing schools seems to cost the less. Saving money is also important for reconstruction after a big disaster.
All in all, improving the school to have less dropouts seems to be the best choice because it can provide people knowledge how to defend themselves and stop future crimes. The students are often referred as the way of the future, I believe so and letting more people get educated will be a good choice.
Dinosaurs, are commonly known, or more likely, predicted to be, cold-blooded animal. However, the reading thinks that they had been endotherms. The lecture refuted each and every point that the reading said.
The first thing that the reading claims is that there were dinosaurs that lived in the polar region, so they must had been endotherms. The lecture refutes the point by suggesting that the polar was warmer at some time of the year. It was said that the polar region was some time cold and some time warm during that time, so the dinosaurs might had migrated during the year.
The second point that the reading mentions is that the leg position are for endotherms, the lecture, again, points out the flaw. These creatures surely had their leg under their body, however, it doesn’t means that they are endotherms. Dinosaurs are large, and the more commonly accepted explanation for this structure is that is was used to support weight.
The lecture finally make the last are argument that the Haversian canals also might not matter much, which makes the last straw that breaks the reading’s back. By judging on the fossil’s growth rings, the lecture comes to the conclusion that even though most dinosaurs never had Haversian canals, their growth rings signature that they didn’t grow all the year like an endotherms, but more like a cold-blooded animal.
All in all, the lecture is right and the dinosaurs are, as we all believed, not endotherms.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: IT_IS[16]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...ondly, it will eliminate the problem by it’s source. Face the fact, most cities aren...
^^^^
Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... make sure the next generation won’t do these kind of things. Most schools will also open ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun dropouts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ll in all, improving the school to have less dropouts seems to be the best choice be...
^^^^
Line 12, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gion, so they must had been endotherms. The lecture refutes the point by suggesting...
^^^
Line 13, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'doesn't' requires base form of this verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...g under their body, however, it doesn’t means that they are endotherms. Dinosaurs are...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 327, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... explanation for this structure is that is was used to support weight. The lectur...
^^
Line 13, column 330, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...planation for this structure is that is was used to support weight. The lecture fi...
^^^
Line 14, column 366, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an endotherm' or simply 'endotherms'?
Suggestion: an endotherm; endotherms
...that they didn’t grow all the year like an endotherms, but more like a cold-blooded animal. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, really, second, secondly, so, well, at least, i think, kind of, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3021.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 617.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89627228525 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98392262146 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39044528799 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 212.727598566 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4943273906 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3129055302 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8529411765 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1470588235 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67647058824 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115283140605 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262370797342 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432379523852 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0448497412463 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479267695751 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: IT_IS[16]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...ondly, it will eliminate the problem by it’s source. Face the fact, most cities aren...
^^^^
Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... make sure the next generation won’t do these kind of things. Most schools will also open ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun dropouts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ll in all, improving the school to have less dropouts seems to be the best choice be...
^^^^
Line 12, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gion, so they must had been endotherms. The lecture refutes the point by suggesting...
^^^
Line 13, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'doesn't' requires base form of this verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...g under their body, however, it doesn’t means that they are endotherms. Dinosaurs are...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 327, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... explanation for this structure is that is was used to support weight. The lectur...
^^
Line 13, column 330, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...planation for this structure is that is was used to support weight. The lecture fi...
^^^
Line 14, column 366, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an endotherm' or simply 'endotherms'?
Suggestion: an endotherm; endotherms
...that they didn’t grow all the year like an endotherms, but more like a cold-blooded animal. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, really, second, secondly, so, well, at least, i think, kind of, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3021.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 617.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89627228525 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98392262146 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39044528799 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 212.727598566 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4943273906 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3129055302 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8529411765 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1470588235 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67647058824 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115283140605 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262370797342 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432379523852 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0448497412463 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479267695751 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.