The given tables depict the comparison between the number of Celsius degrees and daylight time in London and Sydney, took place in the last month of 2018.
Overall, Sydney was clearly hotter than London because of the longer day. It is also clear that the temperature of Austrailia increased through 3 days, compared to a fluctuation in the remaining region.
According to the tables, while the maximum heat of Sydney on Friday was 26 degrees Celsius, it was lower than 10 in Europe. Moreover, it was measured that the temperature of UK increased in the second day and decreased in the last day, the figure of that in Austrailia climbed up mildly from Friday to Sunday. Furthermore, it is completely shown that the gap between maximum and minimum temperature of both countries were stood at the same number, ranging from 4 to 10 degrees.
In terms of daylight hours, it was calculated that the sun rose in London later than Sydney, around 8AM and 5AM respectively. In contrast, the dawn in Europe came earlier than the sunset in Austrailia and it was forecasted around 5-hour gaped. It is also noticeable that the dusk and dawn minutes in both regions remained unchanged at weekends or had an insignificant changes.
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The diagram below shows the process by which beer is made Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Some people think that the best way to make road transport safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test every year To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning Why does this happen What are the solutions 84
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...ged at weekends or had an insignificant changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88942307692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69178823972 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4440389267 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183662728002 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725415362453 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519198672599 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115988696957 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479035340405 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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