The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018

Essay topics:

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The table charts illustrate the temperatures and the time of sunset and sunrise in London and Sydney on the same three days in December 2018.

Overall, in comparison with Sydney, London had much colder weather, and the sun rises later, whereas the time of sunset seemed to be earlier.

In London, the highest temperature recorded was 13 Celcius degrees on Saturday 29th, whereas the maximum temperatures of the previous day and the following day were a bit lower, at 9 and 10 Celcius degrees respectively. Additionally, the minimum temperatures in the three days were not below 3 Celcius degrees. Moreover, the time of sunrise and sunset in this area was approximately 8:06 am and 3:58 pm respectively.

Turning to Sydney, the weather seemed to be much warmer where the maximum temperature and the minimum temperature witnessed an upward trend from 26 to 31 Celcius degrees and 17 to 19 Celcius degrees respectively. Furthermore, the time of sunrise was the same on Friday 28th and Saturday 29th (5:45 pm) and extended by an extra 1 minute on Sunday 30th. Despite earlier sunrise, the time of sunset in Sydney, contrary to that in London, was significantly later at roughly 8:07 pm during the weekend in December 2018.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98048780488 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8582368943 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9061475782 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.625 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218920251334 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108406769113 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106586586319 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165397654097 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110305119383 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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