The given table depicts the proportion of 6800 participants who were over 16s, joining in outdoor and indoor activities through a survey which took place 12 months ago.
Overall, it is clear that a large number of people from all enlisted age groups participate in talented performance and visual arts, compared to a small percentage of residents who took part in computering.
Looking at the table, there was 35% of people ranging from 16 to 24 put a leg in dancing and singing performances, that number decreased to 22% and 17% in 25-44 and 45-74 groups respectively. In contrast, only 6% of all aged 16 and over took part in computer-based activities, however, it is shown a 4% increase in this sector of younger generations ( 16 -24 years old ). Furthermore, writing attracted 17% of young ages, but later, that figure declined to a insignificant number in the rest 3 groups.
Regarding to the table, it is noticeable that crafts and cultural activities contributed for 11% and 17% in both first and second age group and fluctuated in third and fourth mentioned sectors. The remaining visual arts makes up 30% of youngsters undertaking, nevertheless, retired population had less interest in this kind of activities. Thus, there were only 11% of citizens was calculated on the table.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...onths ago. Overall, it is clear that a large number of people from all enlisted age groups par...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se in this sector of younger generations 16 -24 years old . Furthermore, writing ...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of younger generations 16 -24 years old . Furthermore, writing attracted 17% of y...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ges, but later, that figure declined to a insignificant number in the rest 3 grou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, second, third, thus, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00930232558 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0122883615 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6724442703 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.625 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168553524016 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617375827924 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637414027665 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959429441681 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524881988937 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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