Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
Entering the internet era, we can meet many strangers through social media, knowing how they make a living and what kind of problems they have. Some people point out a phenomenon that people are more willing to help people they don't know today than they were in the past. According to my observation, It is true and the reason is that today's people are more likely to have extra resources to help others and they have been educated to help others since they entered primary school.
Firstly, there is no doubt that a person can hardly help others if he doesn’t have enough resources(resources). For example, a person without a stable income is unlikely to donate money to a non-profit organization. However, it is known that many developing countries, especially China, have made a steady development in latest years, As a result, the number of poor people has decreased successively for many years. Therefore, more and more people have extra money after making a life, which enables them to help others, like donating old clothes and books, to people who need them.
Secondly, people have been encouraged to volunteer at their free since they entered primary school. Not only primary schools but also universities have encouraged people to get involved in helping others. Moreover, there are even some schools that require students to volunteer for a specific time to qualify for graduation. I remeber that my primary school asked us to do voluntary jobs during the summer and winter vacation and I had been prized for an excellent job in helping children living in the orphanage. Immersing in this kind of atmosphere, after getting positive feedback after helping others, we are intended to regard the willingness of helping others as a virtue. Therefore, more and more people are willing to dive into voluntary work, helping others as they can.
To conclude, an increasing number of fortune enables people to have resources to help others while the encouragement of universities and schools lets people get the pleasing feeling of helping others. As a consequence, people today are more willing to help others than they were before
- In order to be well informed a person must get information from many different news sources 90
- It is more important for governments to spend money on improving Internet access than on improving public transportation 66
- Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past 63
- When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project 90
- When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...le are more willing to help people they dont know today than they were in the past. ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
...y China, have made a steady development in latest years, As a result, the number of poor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, even so, for example, kind of, no doubt, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04507042254 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68642321102 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6651199713 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43364899858 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172043447649 0.076458572812 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152519564651 0.0737576698707 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297808297702 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794543589713 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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