You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
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Dear Gurdaas Maan,
I am writing this letter regards the music concert was held on last Saturday night at Shivaji Stadium New Delhi.
There were multiple singers came from foreign countries, and who sang songs with their bands with full of energy.
Moreover, I would like mention that, in the last you had sung a song named as "Ki Banu Dunia Da" which your one of the best song, I ever heard in my life. I clearly remember that, I was over the nine clouds while listing to your song.
Furthermore, I am huge fan of you, and I listened all yours songs which were sung by you. Regarding your performance during the concert was mesmerizing, and still I feel beat of music in my ears.
In addition to this, I am also a part-time singer, and I want to listen your music anytime, anyplace. I have been singing songs since 2015, when first I heard your song, named as "Mitha". While listing to your music, immediately I started sang a song. One on my friend made a recording of that songs as well as he uploaded on YouTube.
Consequently, my song got popularity, also I got calls as well as emails from multiple composers to sing songs for them.
Nevertheless, my desire is, to sing a song with you. I can make manage the timetable accordingly and I can be available as per your schedule.
It would be very grateful, if you may reply to this letter.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...you feel. Write a letter to the singer.In your letter say how you feel about his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, while, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 937.175257732 161% => OK
No of words: 308.0 206.0 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.81091881359 2.54303337028 189% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3504724983 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7222222222 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.29896907216 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509632152165 0.216113520407 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170332812606 0.0766984524023 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205693738487 0.0603063233224 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232043686006 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188543165246 0.0580467560999 325% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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