Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by their parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
How children’s free time should be organized has been a heated debate. Two schools of thought can be clearly seen, with one assuming it is the parents’ obvious obligation to decide whereas it is the children’s right in the opinion of the other. Mine, however, can be considered a balance between the two, which shall be discussed in detail in this essay.
Having been the guardians of the young minds since birth, parents have the right to encourage good habits they believe are necessary to reinforce in their children. At the same time, pastime activities they view as unhelpful in the development of their children should also be discouraged. It is so because with little life experience, the immature minds tend to be unable to tell what activities bring about benefits and what do not. Adults’ interference, hence, can be considered the norm.
The young minds’ needs, preferences, and opinions, also, must be taken into consideration when it comes to deciding what their past time looks like. While many children choose to fill their schedule with temporal entertainment activities without supervision, it is not rare to find one’s timetable exclusively crammed with lessons after lessons, when the parents know no boundaries. Properly guided and given sufficient time spent on themselves, children can too be well-aware of their developmental path, although subconsciously, and make wise decisions accordingly.
To sum up, both children’s and parents’ opinions matter, in planning the children’s free time. Should it be properly executed, the children can expect great potential of themselves and endless opportunities down their path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...on when it comes to deciding what their past time looks like. While many children choose ...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to be'?
Suggestion: to be
... time spent on themselves, children can too be well-aware of their developmental path,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42692307692 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0094795988 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6348232797 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454321383863 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171108761014 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102200537377 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284029093089 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539351692698 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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