Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues.
There are two schools of thought when it comes to research allocation, to focus more on solving world health problems or others. Although both have persuasive reasons, I strongly agree that world’s health is but scientists’ foremost priority.
Indeed, there are pressing issues that concern all global citizens, such as AIDS or chronic hepatitis B. These incurable disease are mitigating life quality of the unfortunates and might even be life-threatening. With sufficient funds poured in the medical field, cures can soon be found to save billions of sufferers. Improvement in global health also facilitates positive movements in economy development, in that it creates more healthy workers with better life quality, and hence, better work performance. Considering economy is one of society’s top priorities, the overhealth of human beings deserves lots of attention.
Still, the gravity of other issues, such as education and environmental, proves to be far heavier. Improper education has long been many countries’ most difficult problem, from which serious social evils, for instance, violence, domestic abuse, theft, or illegal drug dealing, to name a few, stem. More funds are also required to strike a balance between production and recycling, which is currently imbalanced, causin most of the world’s environmental issues. Above all, these problems may indirectly affect the mental or physical health of global citizens, posing as yet another burden.
In conclusion, although the field of healthcare still has much to be solved, human society has far more important issues that need equal attention, such as education and environmental problems. To assure optimization in global development, a reasonable divide in funds, hence, is pressingly adviced.
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- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by their parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The given chart demonstrates how an essay in a formal academic module is written Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66292134831 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02612452114 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670411985019 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3391324109 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169864123187 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554119235399 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725775722612 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110725402571 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080011816645 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.