Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
A healthy diet is positively influential, in terms of both physical and mental health. It is, hence, a valid concern for whether or not a child be nutritiously nurtured at school or at home. In this essay, I take a neutral stance between these notions and attempt to discuss the necessity of both.
Spending more than half of their days at school, children deserve to be well-fed there, with a thought-out meal plan. Being put to sit in place for hours on end can be tiresome to even adults, let alone children, but the purpose of such repertoire is, after all, for them to gain knowledge and be their better selves. A nutritious meal, or simply lunch, means every minute of their class hour counts and is spent with well-performed brains, the least to be done for the young minds.
It is, however, rather an ineffective attempt in assuring their health should they arrive home, on a daily basis, to a poorly-nutritious meal. As their sole providers of breakfasts and dinners, two important meals of the day, the parents or guardians take responsibility if their children are found with malnutrition. They also have the most influential power over the youngsters, therefore it is much easier for them than for the teachers to facilitate healthy eating.
In conclusion, children should be encouraged to have a healthy diet both at school and at home, for dieting requires an all-time commitment. Once this is properly executed, the children can expect to follow a healthy diet with ease as they grow, seeing great potential in themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...alth. It is, hence, a valid concern for whether or not a child be nutritiously nurtured at sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8893129771 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82557486494 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0351047116 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19817129486 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860359497533 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889493451416 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143664912317 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097357067517 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.