In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The given memo suggests - it is always better to discuss any idea or suggestion with people who have opposite outlook for the given scenario, in comparison to your vision. The above pretext could be best explained using the proverb, two sides of a coin.
The first side of the coin, it is the situations where I would agree with the speaker's prompt. For any thought or idea that occupies your thinking for a longer duration, it gets the ability to cloud your decisions regarding other opposing possibilities. Your process of analyzing, might tend to ignore any shortcomings. This could be well explained with an example- do you remember when you work on a essay for too long? While continuously working on it we are so immersed into it that we ignore silly mistakes. And what happens when we read the same essay after a period of time? The exactly same essay which seemed perfect once, is now a bundle of grammatical errors or improper sentences. So, what could have been done to ensure the 'perfect' essay?
Referring the essay to another eye to read, and requesting them to find out the errors could have helped the situation, right? Refer the same example of essay in any thought process or upcoming idea, and you could see the prompts view on how having contrasting view could prove to be beneficial. As very well said- oppositions leads to a 'bullet proof' solution.
The another side of the prompt includes situations where contrasting views aren't constructive. Excess opposition could lead to discouragement. The tendency to follow the 'flow of the river' could result in neglecting tangential views. Alas, they might drown in the flow as well. Let's continue the very same example above. What if the third eye has a fixed view of the opinion and is determined to overlook any good points you have made? Even some of the excellent points could be expunged out because of it.
To sum it up, greatest of the scientist, authors etc. have emerged out as the best of their eras, while swimming into a sea of contrasting opinions. One should take every criticism as a suggestion and work to shape things better. Not letting negative opinions discourage you. Points of views are supposed to be difference and difference in views is an evidence to the fact that work is being done in the right direction. So, it is important to discuss views with contrasting people while standing grounds for your opinion and correcting yourself whenever needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g the proverb, two sides of a coin. The first side of the coin, it is the situa...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ample- do you remember when you work on a essay for too long? While continuously ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... when you work on a essay for too long? While continuously working on it we are so im...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ens when we read the same essay after a period of time? The exactly same essay which seemed pe...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ting view could prove to be beneficial. As very well said- oppositions leads to a ...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...udes situations where contrasting views arent constructive. Excess opposition could l...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
..., they might drown in the flow as well. Lets continue the very same example above. W...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ook any good points you have made? Even some of the excellent points could be expunged out ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, third, well, while, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61882920944 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3154340339 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26923076923 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264264548482 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597710355388 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627949266507 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144959712506 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300924803425 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.