Some people argued that the public spends money on modern facilities such as residents' houses and roads rather than the renovation of the old building. In my perspective, It is essential to focus on having basic needs but it is also important to restore an ancient apartment.
On the one hand, the protection of old buildings is beneficial in some ways. First and foremost, perhaps the most vital is calalyze the preference of tourists. Every year, there are thousands of tourists both from home or from abroad visiting the classical landscape and most of them so overwhelmed by their irresistible glamor, as the result, the authorities and residents gain a substantial amount of income by the thriving tourism. Not only that, the old building depicts a country’s history, culture, and heritage. To be more specific, the structures were made by ancestors, this encourages new generation more and more proud of your country.
On the other hand, the furnishing of new residences and road development has numerous advantages. First of all, Inhabitants have the opportunity to live in a fad home with an incredibly cozy environment and reasonable layout. For instance, In the industry 4.0 age, the automatic machine has a diversity of items namely dishwashers, robot vacuum cleansers enabling workers to save time. For second thing, suitable road planning can be implemented, resulting in the demand for public transport. It means that the detrimental road has been quitted to make driving easier.
In conclusion, It is evident that both renovating the old building and constructing new roads and houses have certain advantages.
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 61
- The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle what are the advantages of this trend Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26717557252 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95880068371 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7943993558 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17165769034 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542564613581 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468559387887 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104957479881 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297284041016 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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