Whenever towns are planned it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend
their free time? To what extent do you agree?
In the contemporary era/epoch, there is a heated argument over the issue of building public parks instead of shopping centers for people to
spend their leisure time. There is no lots of doubt over this that public park should be built within the cities. A majority of society favors it,
however, the rest goes opposite to it. The following paragraph would highlight my perspective which will lead to a logical conclusion
Analyzing the statement, I see eve to eye with the given aspect for multifarious reasons, first and foremost reason is that as population is
growing and there is shortage of space so people save no private gardens. Therefore, public park is government property where everyone can visit
for recreation Secondly, public park reduces pollution and makes the area Clean green and fresh.
Probing shad, under our planning public parks are the priorities for the development locality. To substantiate hidden enjoy swings and slides and also play different games whereas old people do yoga and different exercises: Besides, under town planning. a separate area for the entertainment purpose of the people should be organized.
To recapitulate, 1 reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supplying that is essential to have public parks so that public parks so that
public can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building public parks cannot be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31696428571 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73067990127 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2895926725 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279335145981 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109199890283 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860581280955 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109470891568 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066135580073 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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