Whenever towns are planned it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend
their free time? To what extent do you agree?
In the contemporary era/epoch, there is a heated argument over the issue of building public parks instead of shopping centers for people to spend their leisure time. There is no lots of doubt over this that public park should be built within the cities. A majority of society favors it, however, the rest goes opposite to it. The following paragraph would highlight my perspective which will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement, I see eve to eye with the given aspect for multifarious reasons, first and foremost reason is that as population is growing and there is shortage of space so people save no private gardens. Therefore, public park is government property where everyone can visit for recreation Secondly, public park reduces pollution and makes the area Clean green and fresh.
Probing shad, under our planning public parks are the priorities for the development locality. To substantiate hidden enjoy swings and slides and also play different games whereas old people do yoga and different exercises: Besides, under town planning. a separate area for the entertainment purpose of the people should be organized.
To recapitulate, 1 reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supplying that is essential to have public parks so that public parks so that public can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building public parks cannot be overlooked either.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'There are no lots'?
Suggestion: There are no lots
...for people to spend their leisure time. There is no lots of doubt over this that public park sho...
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...xercises: Besides, under town planning. a separate area for the entertainment pur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arate area for the entertainment purpose of the people should be organized. To...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... parks so that public can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blic can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building public parks canno...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r fitness and the benefits of building public parks cannot be overlooked either...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27678571429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73929677312 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.822738152 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279335145981 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099060631477 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874479941645 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157734270222 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293710613474 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are no lots'?
Suggestion: There are no lots
...for people to spend their leisure time. There is no lots of doubt over this that public park sho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...xercises: Besides, under town planning. a separate area for the entertainment pur...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arate area for the entertainment purpose of the people should be organized. To...
^^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... parks so that public can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building p...
^^
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blic can maintain their fitness and the benefits of building public parks canno...
^^
Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r fitness and the benefits of building public parks cannot be overlooked either...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27678571429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73929677312 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.822738152 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279335145981 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099060631477 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874479941645 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157734270222 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293710613474 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.