The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now

Essay topics:

The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now

The provided map illustrates the development of a village named Pebbleton over a 20-year period.

In general, the town has undergone a number of changes regarding to accommodation and other infrastructures, which is now more resident-friendly.

The South side of Pebbleton remains the same as it was with a school surrounded by trees and is connected with the Northern part by Roadbridge. The playing field of the town lies on the left of the intersection of Old Fort Road with Lighthouse Lane, opposite to the housing area. The lighthouse in the West of the town stays at the same spot over a 20-year period.

It is noticeable that the residential area on Lighthouse Lane is expanded, with twice as much houses as there were 20 years ago. Pebbleton has built a community center and tennis courts next to the residential area, near a newly constructed bridge linking the North and South part of the town. The old fort in front of the lighthouse has now been converted into a playground for children, and the former film studio has now become an apartment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...use Lane, opposite to the housing area. The lighthouse in the West of the town stay...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hthouse Lane is expanded, with twice as much houses as there were 20 years ago. Pebb...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85164835165 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01337937522 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.612191921 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.375 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213085413183 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921382360701 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762460215254 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135094550437 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806158053761 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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