As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.
To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?
A minority of individuals in the current contemporary society, the ideas of cloning in oder to increase equality in work and provide spare part is becoming closer to the reality. Wheras others believe that this is horrible and should not be turn to reality.The further essay will discuss both sides and give the opinion to the issue above.
On the one hand, cloning techonogy could help citizens develope and modernize different industries a country. For instance, in health industries, scientist and pharmacologist can use clone to replace human in risky experiment that have a substantial effect on individuals's life. Hence, human can minimize the amount of time for vaccine research and others and other medicines. Furthermore, clones being supllied for hospitality could be consider as one of the most important benefit. In fact without thinking about humanity, this is a plethora of breakthrough in the development of the world.
On the other hand, although cloning technology brings several ginormous benefits for inhabitants, the amount of finance and time to create them are trinormous. In general, sicentists need to invest not only in facilities but also the resources. Thus, the world will lose a large amount of fortune and timefun for the others fields' development
In conclusion, from my perspective, i do not agree with this notion. People should apply this techonogy for animals rather than human. Otherwise it will have a momentous influence on the world’s budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27426160338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90083084002 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6179673044 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122531429095 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417086942583 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446245049343 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729337061695 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381012717932 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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