Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?
In recent years, illness and diseases have been problem with everyone for millions of people in the world. Some people suggest that the only way to win the battle against these invisible enemies is by addressing environmental hazards and housing issues. As far as I am concerned, i am on the same wavelength with this statement.
There is no room for doubt that environmental pollutions are increasingly worse and have a negative impact on human health. Take, air pollution as an example,which is caused by emissions from industrial factories and vehicles, has been blamed for contracting respiratory problems of citizens. However, these thorny issues are not solved if the governmental bodies do not join hands in. They should enforce laws to fine the transgressions polluting public areas, encourage dwellers to commute by public transportations. Therefore, a wide range of positive solutions for the authorities to do so they should raise their voice and improve the living standard of.
In addition, the housing problem is also a concern for the state to pay attention to, especially in metropolitans where the high proportion of workers concentrate there. Due to the high living cost, some labourers become homeless and do not have fixed accommodations, they sleep in dirty places, such as under the bridges or on the pavements. That residing in unhygienic areas put them at high risk of contagious diseases, which could spread the virus to other innocent people, leading to the pandemic outbreak.
In conclusion, no countries want to be isolated from diseases and illness so the local states must introduce and enforce appropriate measures to alleviate environmental issues and housing problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31365313653 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0477962478 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1362427638 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210434842213 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067797321058 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415997102725 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119339466078 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642527995297 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.