A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter expecting inclusion to the article 'The book that influenced me the most'. 'The Theory of Everything' by Stephen Hawking that left a huge impact on me.
As I have a lot of interest in space science, this book caught my attention. It has covered all the possibilities related to creation and existence of the Universe. Though it is not a proven theory, everything about it is beyond the imagination.
Reading did not interest me much, but after reading this book, my curiosity to know our Universe has escalated drastically. I am quite influenced by it because it has all the answers related to mysteries of the black holes, galaxies, planets, and stars.
I believe that this edition influenced not only me but also has the potential to create an impact on the numerous individuals who have interest in knowing the world they are living in. In fact, people have started believing in this theory, even though it has not been proven yet.
I am positively waiting to see my contribution being published in your article.
Thanks and Regards
Steve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74117636551 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5460048386 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232510434024 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763236323885 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961681702072 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124300669484 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882850550209 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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