People have to spend more and more time to travel their homes for job and study. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?
Holidays means relaxation from their daily routine and enjoying with family and friends. Nowadays many people go to other countryside and spend more time because of their job and study.
Today, not only people but also children or adults are go to the foreign country. Because their country has not developed yet. So that they have to go to the other country. On the other hand some people have not enough work and money. Moreover, on their own country has not enough work place for working.That's why government should be responsible it. They should be create new and enough work place for working. In addition, education system should be evolved.Becouse if on their country is developing well children do not to go other places and do not spend time and money much. For this reason government should be incrase tourism and attractive place. Because If their country will attract more tourist they have more income. Tourism plays a vital role in the progress and earning a revenue for any nation.
To solve this issue, professional tutors should be invited to their country. Government ought to create good chances for pupils in education. Also, the salary of employers should be increased.
My conculisive point about this situation that government should be develop and be responsible for work and education
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om their daily routine and enjoying with family and friends. Nowadays many people...
^^
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... people but also children or adults are go to the foreign country. Because their c...
^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se their country has not developed yet. So that they have to go to the other country. O...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
...y has not enough work place for working.Thats why government should be responsible it...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...y has not enough work place for working.Thats why government should be responsible it...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'created'?
Suggestion: created
...hould be responsible it. They should be create new and enough work place for working. ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Becouse
...ion, education system should be evolved.Becouse if on their country is developing well ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r country is developing well children do not to go other places and do not spend ...
^^
Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e incrase tourism and attractive place. Because If their country will attract more tour...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developed'?
Suggestion: developed
...his situation that government should be develop and be responsible for work and educat...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that government should be develop and be responsible for work and education
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02293577982 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57813264764 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9007989379 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4375 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221578492626 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790017863329 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689167431815 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133567336688 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063415082438 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om their daily routine and enjoying with family and friends. Nowadays many people...
^^
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... people but also children or adults are go to the foreign country. Because their c...
^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se their country has not developed yet. So that they have to go to the other country. O...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
...y has not enough work place for working.Thats why government should be responsible it...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...y has not enough work place for working.Thats why government should be responsible it...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'created'?
Suggestion: created
...hould be responsible it. They should be create new and enough work place for working. ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Becouse
...ion, education system should be evolved.Becouse if on their country is developing well ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r country is developing well children do not to go other places and do not spend ...
^^
Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e incrase tourism and attractive place. Because If their country will attract more tour...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developed'?
Suggestion: developed
...his situation that government should be develop and be responsible for work and educat...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that government should be develop and be responsible for work and education
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02293577982 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57813264764 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9007989379 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4375 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221578492626 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790017863329 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689167431815 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133567336688 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063415082438 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.