Some people say that devoting one’s time to family activities is more important than spending time working. Others believe that dedicating one’s time to work is more important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It would be argued by some that to be more successful people need to concentrate more on their occupation which means they have to spend more time at workplace. However, I firmly believe that beside the working hours, they also have their own families that should not be ignored because family is always a place supporting human’s mentality.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some believe that working time is more necessary and vital. The first reason is job gives people passion and motivation, another reason is it can create an income for each person in order to maintain their subsistence. For instance, a man with a well-paid job will be likely to sustain his living-cost and can also afford to better his family.
On the other hand, I would argue that family activities play an important role on our life because they can support our spirit. Family is a place where people grow up and come back whenever they have problems. A person can have a lot of jobs but he only has one family so even that people can spend hours for work but at the end of the day the only place to come back is their home or family.
In conclusion, although some people think that people should sacrifice for their work, I personally believe that family is more important and should be spent more time with.
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- Some people say that devoting one s time to family activities is more important than spending time working Others believe that dedicating one s time to work is more important Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people say that devoting one s time to family activities is more important than spending time working Others believe that dedicating one s time to work is more important Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56779661017 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34947597255 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3248137261 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305883759931 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136870330905 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111903940872 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203842232422 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703198686523 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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