As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but nowadays an increasing number of people believe that companies also have social obligations besides contributing to the economy. I fully agree with the notion that companies should do more for the society than simply make money.
On the one hand, companies have always been inclined to gain profits. Because businesses are established on the basis of making money, logically, their utmost priority alongside profiting is covering fundamental running costs such as employees’ wages, office rent, and utilities. If a corporation is not financially stable, they are unlikely to thrive in a highly competitive market like today. In other words, it is crucial for companies to yield profits for maintenance and growth before concerning societal responsibilities.
On the other hand, running a business with the sole purpose of maximizing profits is unethical. Firstly, the most basic social obligation that business owners have is to treat their employees well by providing healthy work environments, and paying a “living wage”. Another simple way that companies can contribute to society is to allocate funding to help address pressing problems namely poverty. This kind of activity can also be considered a way for company to promte their brand image, thereby driving more sales. For instance, Unilever, a pharmaceutical multinational company, is renowned for having a notable record of financially and medically aiding impoverished people in developing countries. As a result, not only do they remain a prosperous organization but they are admired by the public, as well.
In conclusion, the importance of companies' social responsibilities ought to be equally accentuated as their financial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59701492537 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13756052253 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5619505206 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227008652936 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072062024592 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645583921165 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142757174684 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809305455855 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.