o you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
universities and colleges can provide students with lots of activities that can benefit them in many aspects of their life. However, some people think that is not important as academic studies since students are supposed to attend universities to study rather than waste their time on sports. In my opinion, I disagree with that for many reasons I will explore in this essay. Firstly, sports are very important for students in college since they are already far from their families and friends, so they need to be involved in physical activities to spend the free time they have. For instance, my nephew was accepted into engineering school in a far state last year, so he was not happy to part from his family, he tried to quit college and get back to his city. Fortunately, one of his colleagues suggested that he enrolls in the college football team, Since then he got to be busy studying and then joining the football team. secondly, It is good to get young people to practice and move since when students start school far from home, they would eat in restaurants or fast food so they might gain weight. Sports are the best to keep them in shape. In addition to that, they help young people to get friends. As a result, sports and social activities are really necessary for students as libraries, so they need to get the same financial support that they do the same as what academic studies do.
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- TPO 50 Integrated Writing Task 57
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- TOEFL integrated writing work a four day week 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Universities
universities and colleges can provide students with ...
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Line 1, column 929, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ing and then joining the football team. secondly, It is good to get young people to prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64112903226 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41722688676 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3433826216 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115776665136 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494316634994 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401434813088 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115776665136 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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