Widespread of technology has given people more freedom to work instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?
The popularity of technology has bring tremendous impacts on humankind. It is believed that this trend brings more benefits than drawbacks. In my opinion, the advantages of the development would overshadow its disadvantages.
The contribution of cutting-edge technological equipment and application could be witnessed in many aspects of life. First, with the advent of smart devices together with wifi connection, people now are able to study at home or place that are convenient to them. Applications such as Zoom or Google Meet are optimized in order to help many people communicate at once, upload and download learning materials, record lessons easily and effectively. Likewise, the instant connection of wireless devices also enables workers to perform their task at their houses. Job holders, who are used to be burdened with heavy workload and long hours commuting to workplaces, now can speed up their working process and stay at their living places while working simultaneously. Thus, it is beneficial not only the employees but also employers who can save their budget from renting space and funding neccessities for working.
However, the lack of direct communication between managers and their subordinates as well as teachers and student implies several pitfalls. The first problem is that it would lower the quality of working or studying of individuals. It is unarguable that face-to-face interaction is the best form of communication among people. Therefore, if students or wage-earners heavily depend of online platforms for studying or working, they are likely to experience misinformation or misunderstanding. This could cause dire consequences for themselves and their organisations. An additional issue is that people would feel lonely and socially isolated, if they utilized technology for long period of time. In person conversation is the essential way for people use to build rapport and establish meaningful relationships. Without directly talking and observing, persons are unable to see others’ body language, watch their behaviors, and listen to their real voices, which are fundamental for people to build trust with others.
In sum, although there are certain issues associated with using technology for work and absorbing new knowledge, the role of technology is becoming increasingly significant in modern society. I believe that with new technological breakthoughs, the weeknesses of technological invention will be limited while the positive impact of the sector will be expanded.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60471204188 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19227608887 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630890052356 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0409026705 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.684210526 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140632052229 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418252268816 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351550443468 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904253732431 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018220773711 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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