While some students may get influenced by their teachers, I think the majority of the students are influenced by their friends. The reasons why I believe this way will be discussed in the following passage.
First, I am assuming that most of the students only meet their teachers in the classroom. Teachers mostly talk about the subject, they are teaching. Students don't get to speak anything more than that. They can go to their office and speak about different topics but most of them don't. On the other hand, students are likely to spend more time with their friends apart from lecture hours. They might hang out with each other, may live in the same hostel, eat and play together, etc. Meanwhile, they are more likely to talk about different subjects and explore them, in turn influencing each other or catalyzing that spark of fire. For example, before joining my college I used to love football and played it in most of my leisure time. But, after joining my college, friends in my circle were more interested in playing cricket. So, I also started playing this sport and begin to admire it. Now, I was spending the majority of my free time playing cricket and also got selected for my college team.
Students can get influenced by their teacher, but they simply don't get the platform to interact with them more openly. They can meet them for a limited time. Most of the students are even shy of their teachers and don't even treat them as a mentor, simply restricting them to be a teacher.
This can be understood by the psychology of students. They are more comfortable interacting with people who lie in the same age group as they do. All of the teachers are twice or thrice their age. Therefore, it is obvious that a student will not be comfortable interacting with their teachers when compared to their friends who are in the same age group as theirs. A student might need a third person to start a talk between them and their teachers such as their parents. This type of situation rarely occurs and most of them never interact with their teachers.
Hence, considering the above two reasons, a student is more likely to be influenced by their friends rather than their teachers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...he subject, they are teaching. Students dont get to speak anything more than that. T...
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...about different topics but most of them dont. On the other hand, students are likely...
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...enced by their teacher, but they simply dont get the platform to interact with them ...
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Suggestion: don't
...ents are even shy of their teachers and dont even treat them as a mentor, simply res...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...o lie in the same age group as they do. All of the teachers are twice or thrice their age....
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Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...hem never interact with their teachers. Hence, considering the above two reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, third, while, apart from, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70725388601 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40387287408 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476683937824 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.410411639 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322116028948 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104213551638 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832703446027 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220473334826 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045611545857 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he subject, they are teaching. Students dont get to speak anything more than that. T...
^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...about different topics but most of them dont. On the other hand, students are likely...
^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...enced by their teacher, but they simply dont get the platform to interact with them ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ents are even shy of their teachers and dont even treat them as a mentor, simply res...
^^^^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...o lie in the same age group as they do. All of the teachers are twice or thrice their age....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem never interact with their teachers. Hence, considering the above two reasons...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, third, while, apart from, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70725388601 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40387287408 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476683937824 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.410411639 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322116028948 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104213551638 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832703446027 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220473334826 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045611545857 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.