Some people believe that always telling the truth is not necessary to consider in any relationship between people because sometimes the truth can be misunderstood by some people and that makes them afraid of telling the truth. However, in my opinion, I believe that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship for the following three reasons.
The first reason is, telling the truth is a behavior of honesty. In any relationship between people, they have to be honest with each other. Honesty is the base of any relationship. If they are not telling the truth then they are not honest with each other and their relationship might not go well in the end. For example, if two businessmen are working as partners they have to be honest with each other so that they both can be profitable in business. In contrast, if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry between them and that can also affect their business.
Second, from a religious view, telling the truth is always encouraged and lying is considered the most heinous crime in almost every religion in the world. Telling the truth no matter what does not burden your brain with new ways of telling lies. Not telling the truth is considered to be a sin. For instance, in Islam lying to anyone is forbidden and sinful while telling the truth is awarded. Lying is considered to be the root of other crimes. So whenever you are not telling the truth you are increasing your sins.
Finally, people have to lie ten times more just to hide one truth. And at the end, they always get caught up that they were lying. When other people find out that they were being lied to then it angers them. It often leads to the breakup of the relationship. For instance, when you lie about having a bad habit to your girlfriend that she does not like then continuing that habit would be hard without telling her any lie. And when she finally finds out about that habit she ultimately breaks up with you. However, if you told the truth at the beginning then there would not be this much waste of time. I prefer to know the truth no matter what, even if that might hurt a lot. Couse now or then the truth always comes out.
In conclusion, I consider always telling the truth the most important consideration in any relationship because of the above three reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usiness. Second, from a religious view, telling the truth is always encouraged a...
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Message: “So whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sidered to be the root of other crimes. So whenever you are not telling the truth you are i...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays get caught up that they were lying. When other people find out that they were be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59294117647 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41865414834 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425882352941 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1784437594 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7083333333 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272339890613 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959097774911 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719427592014 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197515345597 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754886343556 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.