Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Public transportation and access to the Internet both are the most important pillars in each society of today's world. Due to the fact, we live in a high-speed age and chaotic world, it is important for us to use last updated devices that make lives easier and more convenient. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether the government should spend more money to improve Internet access or whether should improve public transportation. Some people possess the conviction that the former is agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more fruitful. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted. I think it is absolutely important to access the internet easily, However, I prefer the government to improve public transportation. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason that elucidates my standpoint is that it depends on the kind of country. when people use the high qualify transportation Vehicle are more satisfied. Gas and fuel prices are rose dramatically last few years, thus, it is hard for people to use their private cars. Air pollution makes living harmful. Consequently, it make a bad influence on people's lives. Consider my personal experience to make this point clear. I live in a country that has dysfunctional public transportation Vehicles. Using these devices is inconvenient. Although some people use them for their daily transmission other people prefer to use their car and it makes air pollution at a high rate. So as consequence, in the fall, the schools and universities are off due to air pollution.
The second rationale fact behind this opinion is rooted in this fact that the if the government improves public transportation, it brings more modernities and civilization to the country. Probably we all know about easily life in Japan. The Metro and sub-ground in Japan are more moderate and people can use them without any consternation to their nature. It is a key feature to remember Japan as a developed country.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I disagree with this statement that the government should spend more money to improve Internet access.
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Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, i think, in brief, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15718157182 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0597802172 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3906338509 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298799837163 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763470996844 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930606001709 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208023626256 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114805641986 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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