Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, the way to have a successful career has been a topic of debate. Although some people think that landing a job has many benefits, persuading tertiary education is more beneficial
On the one hand, gaining work experience right after school can bring a host of benefits for students. Pupils working gain practical practical experiences. In Vietnam, for example, they choose to study cooking at high-end restaurants to study recipes and cooking skills before opening their own restaurant, which has been their lucrative source of income. Moreover, young workers stand a higher chance of getting proundation. Since they start their internship earlier than university graduates, they will have more time to pick up professional skills, making them with qualified enough for higher positions in their company.
On the other hand, attending education acts as an incentive for students to advance their career path. Firstly, academic qualifications require many specific professions. For instance, doctors or lawyers need to have experience at university education to hold sufficient expertise to perform their tasks. Secondly, many jobs require good soft skills, which only has in clubs of schools. This necessitates the importance of university education.
All in all, heading to work after graduation brings a lot of benefits, tertiary education is still considered the key to achieving long-term goals at work. Therefore, students should consider carefully based on their personal backgrounds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: practical
...efits for students. Pupils working gain practical practical experiences. In Vietnam, for example, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6288209607 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8684405889 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8918833449 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119859126925 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038346962384 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285132333136 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726973297084 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285461489109 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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