You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter,
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. Andrw,
I am your new next-door neighbor just have moved last month at new home. I want to planning a party at my new home and inviting some friends as well as you with some DJ program.
I am an assistant professor of a university. I just came here with my 2 children and husband. In addition, due to two minutes walking distance of work place to my home, I am happy to here with my family. However, buy a new home is my dream which I have got after a while. Now I have decided to doing a party with my friends and neighbor. In the party we are using heavy sound systems for dancing which can make some noise. Please could you allow me only one night for DJ party. Moreover, I also would like to invite you with whole family to my party which is held on 27th of march at new home.
I would be happy if you come to the party and do lots of fun with us.
Warm wishes
najam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an assistant professor of a university. I just came here with my 2 children and ...
^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t professor of a university. I just came here with my 2 children and husband. In ...
^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do lots of fun with us. Warm wishes najam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02247191011 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09721441307 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6927587808 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223095099272 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751945293839 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065567355681 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166363768659 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911032557598 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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