Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
The problem of environment, population and education which were always debatable has become more contentious with many people calming that it is hazardous while others disagree.In my opinion, the environment pollution, over population and leak of schooling systems will be bought more drawbacks in next ten years.This essay will explain the reasons attributing to this trend along with remedial measures in the looming paragraphs.
To begin, there are numerous causes to destroy environment.Firstly, deforestation is one of the main reason for affecting atmosphere due to cutting trees.For example, in Bangladesh has only 25% of forest as deforestation occur by some peoples.Moreover, many undeveloped countries have higher birth rate than developing countries due to leak of family planning and education.To take an example, a survey done by 'India Government' in 2019 around 20% of family have at least five children of each family in many rural area.Furthermore, some countries have inevitable demerits of education owing to over population.For instance, a small number of population of Bangladesh educated because of densely population in village.
However, every problem has some solutions.Besides, people should be used proper disposal system for waste garbage and planting more trees to make green world.In addition, authority can more concern about birth rate.If they provide workshop about family planning, would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some initiatives for education system. For example, providing distance learning to rural area where unable to commutate by road using advanced technology.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mentioned above one can reach to conclusion that the problem of environment, population and education are too dire to ignore.Nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81454545455 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34535572977 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.116712085 49.4020404114 439% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.5 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8333333333 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209717965698 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088893455992 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598451512945 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122380818794 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362925762961 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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