Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
University is one of the major sources of the students learning throughout their life. The time student spends on university is also found to represent the future of the student. If a university is able to provide student with knowledge in various fields outside of the academic course then the university is making student more pragmatic to the real world.
Student will start exploring different fields, try different courses and learn about the new things happening worldwide. It is possible that they could monetize the learnt skills and start their own enterprise , earning lots of money than they would ever otherwise the skills learnt in university could later transition into his occupation or simply make him popular than his contemporaries , resulting large friend circle. For instance, Despite Ram being a average student in study he joins guitar club and now he has extra thing to sell for and starts performing in the annual function of his university making him more popular and earning him good confidence which later helped him to become topper of his class.
Today students have negative feelings towards their universities and studies. For instance, upon surveying students in universities in America, it was found that they would love to be a youtuber in future as their first choice. However, students claiming they wanted to be a doctor, engineer or something related to their academics were significantly low. This clearly reflects the current tendencies of young minds. Changes can be made and university could be made cool again. Introducing courses like film making, photography, videography, video editing will attract many students to pursue university education.
However the extra courses shouldn’t be compulsory for all. There are still large number of students those aim to be academic personnel in future like teacher, lecturer, scientists etc. The solution to this problem can be making those courses optional. This approach will be beneficial for all the students with varied interests.
Future will be full of new inventions and different ways to earning daily bread. Some geniuses will even earn huge amounts of money and achieve greater heights monetizing their interests. This all above points point towards enabling various extra courses in universities will have greater positive impact upon its students.
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- TOEFL Integrated Writing Task Directions In this section you will write a response to a question based on reading passage and a listening passage You have to consider the contents of both passages in order to write a good answer After reading and listenin 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to represent the future of the student. If a university is able to provide student...
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Suggestion:
...ning worldwide. It is possible that they could monetize the learnt skills and sta...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nt skills and start their own enterprise , earning lots of money than they would e...
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Suggestion:
... of money than they would ever otherwise the skills learnt in university could la...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...make him popular than his contemporaries , resulting large friend circle. For inst...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...circle. For instance, Despite Ram being a average student in study he joins guita...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ents to pursue university education. However the extra courses shouldn’t be compulso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38378378378 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67318402327 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572972972973 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.4546476228 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.842105263 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198030437727 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692774760658 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554290822055 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119551381144 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674548272161 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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