The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas
The procedure illustrates how a storage area is made from concrete canvas. Overall, this is a man-made linear process involving two main stages, producing the concrete canvas and forming the storage.
In the first step, the concrete canvas is manufactured with three layers, consisting of a fibrous top surface, dry concrete and waterproof concrete. After that, the produced canvas is delivered to the construction area and unwrapped carefully to get ready for the next step.
The concrete canvas is spread on the ground for ten meters and fixed by nails and ropes in four corners of the canvas. With an air pump being added into the process, the canvas is pumped to create a space of 8 meters high for storage. Once the pumping phase has finished, it is watered immediately to form the storage. The setting takes about 20-24 hours to be done before being qualified to store things.
- Fewer young people choose to work in farming What are the reasons Should young people be encouraged to do farming work 67
- Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people s behavior What is your opinion 73
- The table shows the average salaries in US dollars in five countries at different stages until achieving the maximum salary 78
- The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation 78
- The pictures illustrate the innovations of the Nature Museum from 2010 to 2013 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54897800871 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8455315521 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.625 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228474203259 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960736846835 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758306987361 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161250671697 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732077933712 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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