People should be able to keep all the money they earn, they should not pay tax for the state. Agree or disagree?
People should be able to keep all the money they earn, they should not pay tax for the state. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a minority of individuals in the current contemporary society believe that people sould keep all the finances that they earn rather than pay taxes for the state. From my perspective, I do not agree with the notion above, the further paragraphs will discuss and give reasons on my opinion.
On the one hand, several citizens now are anxious and struggle with their salary and income due to the current unstable world situation. For instance, the Russian Ukraine war has lead to the rised of gasoline price and influenced the world enconmy. As a result, individuals have tendency to minimize their spent on daily necessities and keep their salary rather than pay tax for the government. Moreover, the Covid 19 padmemic also have substantial impact on major companies and workers. Nonetheless, citizens should have a higher awareness that pay tax is still necessary to ameliorate the economy and assuring the gasoline price.
On the one hand, paying taxes for the state and goverment not only refurbishing state’s facilities but also make a plethora of breakthroughs in the modernization and industrialization process. In particulary, if the general department of taxation receive a large amount of taxes, a trinormous investion will be done in different industry namely: Scientific, technology and education industry. Hence, the developing of severals industries motivate workers and create new jobs for the society, thereby redue the gap between richs and poors.
In conclusion, every citizen should have an obligation to pay tax for the state and government. Otherwise, society and industries won’t have enough fortune to develop effective and sustianable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30633802817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92519605665 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4441235733 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456199807561 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156990223947 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231732598878 0.0667982634062 347% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326635788645 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.340722115422 0.056905535591 599% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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