Some people believe that the advantages of using plastic containers outweigh the disadvantages. However, in my opinion, the disadvantages of plastic containers outweigh the advantages, even though the advantages outnumber the disadvantages. There are two reasons why I think the disadvantages have more problems than the advantages as below.
First, general plastic does not decay and cannot be recycled, so it causes lots of environment problems to earth, especially waste treatment. Since it does not disappear naturally, some people burn the plastics to remove them, but it emits serious chemical toxics which are deadly harmful to people. Some people try to bury the plastic waste, but there is not enough space to bury the huge amount of plastic waste for hundreds of years. So, most countries are encouraging to reduce the usage of plastic containers. For example, currently some supermarkets do supply the plastic bags to their customers and most cafes provide paper cups and straws to reduce the plastic wastes.
Second, plastic containers destroy the ecosystem. Due to plastic wastes in sea, many ocean creatures are threatened their lives. In addition with wastes floating over the sea, the waste in the deep sea pollute the living spaces of oceanic lives and reduce their numbers. It leads the destroy of ecosystem and affect seriously to the survival of human beings. For example, we can see many cases that a group of whales or thousands of fishes are dead on the seashore, and their abdomens are filled with plastic wastes. These cases are happening more often and getting serious.
To sum up, the disadvantages of plastic containers is to pollute our nature and destroy our ecosystem which is related to our survival in this earth, because they are not recycled and decayed. In this regards, even though plastic containers have many advantages, disadvant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...reatures are threatened their lives. In addition with wastes floating over the sea, the ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ives and reduce their numbers. It leads the destroy of ecosystem and affect seriously to th...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e they are not recycled and decayed. In this regards, even though plastic containers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22185430464 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7033113394 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4106247689 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260807105542 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933732663055 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742409485444 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167906333889 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094016810406 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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