The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Given is the line graph depicting the rate of population falling into the 65 and over age bracket in three separate nations: USA, Sweden and Japan over a century, commencing with the year 1940.
Perceptibly, all of the populations in the three aforementioned countries witnessed a significant upswing throughout the period. Moreover, Japan’s figure, despite being the lowest at the beginning, was the highest at its conclusion.
It is evident that merely 5% of the population in Japan was in the 65 and over age group in the year 1940. Interestingly, this figure slightly fluctuated prior to remaining at the same level for the next 60 years. Thereafter, it surprisingly experienced a drastic leap to report at 27% in 2040. Besides, the proportion of people 65 and over in Sweden was recorded at a loftier point than in Japan, with 8% in the first year. Subsequently, this data multiplied by 14% in 2000, and at the end it witnessed an exponential leap to 25%.
Furthermore, the USA ranked first at the beginning of the examined year, attaining 9%. Additionally, it registered at the same rate as Sweden in the year 2000, at 14%. This
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ncing with the year 1940. Perceptibly, all of the populations in the three aforementioned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02341449012 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6020568951 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202333253431 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825980867241 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102488932434 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128215318072 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993192300791 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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