The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line chart compares the information about the percentage of population aged 65 and older in Japan, Sweden and America in one century.
In general, it is predicted that there would be an upward trend in this group of population in all three countries. It is clear that, while in 1940 Japan was the country having lowest percentage of citizen aged 65 and over, it is expected to have the highest one in 2040.
In 1940, proportion of 65 years old and older population in three countries were under 10%, with the lowest one was Japan, at 5%, followed by Sweden and USA respectively. The percentage of this group of citizen in Sweden is forecasted to see a fluctuation and peak at around 26% in 2040.
If we look at the figure of USA, there was an increase in about the firts 42 years before leveling off at about 14% until 2020. In the last 20 years, there is a predictation that this figure will increase to about 23% and be the lowest one compared to other countries. In contrast, Japan saw a slight decrease until around the year 1990 before hitting a trough and is expected to be the country that has the highest percentage of population aged 65 and over in 2040, about 27%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the lowest'.
Suggestion: having the lowest
...at, while in 1940 Japan was the country having lowest percentage of citizen aged 65 and over,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51231534547 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2403830344 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230618010375 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107603330612 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859220454098 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15829453649 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531208800484 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.