The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given line graph illustrates the changes in the percentage of people at the age of 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three countries namely Japan, Sweden and the USA.
Overall, it is clear that an upward trend of aging population can be witnessed in all three countries throughout the period. The proportion recorded in Japan consistently held the lowest rank in the past and is predicted to dramatically surpass the other two countries to take the first position in 2040.
Commencing with the data of the USA in 1940, the percentage of people aged 65 and over was just roughly 8%, then the figure increased by nearly twofold to around 15% in 1980. After that, a dramatic rise is predicted to increase in the proportion of people aged 65 and over, from just under 15% in 2020 to approximately 24% in 2040. A similar pattern was observed in Sweden where there was a remarkable increase of three times in the percentage of people from the age of 65, from nearly 6% to under 15% in 1980. Then, it continued going up to reach a peak of 20% in 2017, and it is foreseen that the percentage of this age group will keep increasing to the highest point, at approximately 23%.
Regarding the percentage of people from the age of 65 in Japan, it dipped and recovered between 1940 and 2000. Over the following 25 years, the figure is expected gradually to 10% before rocketing to approximately 27% at the end of the period observed.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56809338521 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65824547063 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509727626459 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.6956786343 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318376356425 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137983816958 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083797212299 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20771042008 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661673882303 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56809338521 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65824547063 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509727626459 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.6956786343 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318376356425 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137983816958 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083797212299 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20771042008 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661673882303 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.