The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The given line graph gives information about the rate of old citizens in three different nations namely Japan, Sweden, and the US over a period of a century starting from 1940 to 2040.

Overall, as can be seen from the line graph, an upward trend is expected to be seen in the percentage of residents aged 65 and over in both three countries. In addition, the figure for Japan is predicted to experience the most noticeable change over the given period.

In 1940, the proportion of 65 and over people in the US was the highest, at roughly 9%, while the figures for Sweden and Japan were slightly lower, at approximately 7% and 5% respectively. After six decades, a significant increase of 12% to about 19% was seen in the percentage of people aged 65 and over in Japan, helping this country to have the highest rate in the three nations. At the same time, after witnessing a slight decline and a gradual rise, the proportion of the older generation in Japan was less than 8%, whereas the figure for Sweden increased slightly to about 14%.

In 2040, the percentage of people in the 65-and-over age group in Japan is projected to rocket by 19% to 27% and become the highest figure in the chart. Meanwhile, significant rises to roughly 25% and 23.5% are expected to happen in the figures for Sweden and the USA respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63983050847 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6305984335 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504237288136 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.6856542215 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242700233768 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109136412591 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705536134757 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153593782248 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033999961772 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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