Dear Sir,
The main problem we're facing on my street called ututu is the lack of dumpsters to accommodate the daily refuse waste and negligence on the part of the refuse disposal staff in taking away the trash of the neighborhood daily.
Big piles of trash can be seen on various parts of the street and this results in the major traffic which we experience every day. Because of the offensive odour that comes from the dumpster, the environment has become very unhealthy for residents. Those in charge of disposing wastes in the area fail to clear the bin daily and this results in breeding of mosquitoes which infect the residents with malaria.
I'd appreciate if you increase the number of dumpsters on my street to accommodate the amount of trash available on a daily basis. Due to the lack of removal of daily waste, my wife also suggests that there should be strict monitoring to make sure those in charge of emptying the dumpster do it on a daily basis.
I hope you act on this as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
Adam Grant
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 73
- You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend 73
- Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad Despite knowing that millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities What are the causes and what are the solutions to this 73
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...nfect the residents with malaria. Id appreciate if you increase the number o...
^^
Line 16, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Adam Grant
^^^
Line 17, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble. Yours Faithfully, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77297297297 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50340892493 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.484373107 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144663899202 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674594313635 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046411291468 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977609844978 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428341030086 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.