Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, majority of companies are using sports in term of their advertisement. Stated by some people that this brings some benefits is it but others argue the opposite way. There are opinions of both views which will be elucidated below.
It is a common fact that sports have its own audience. More people these days are watching sports and companies, of course, could introduce their product to wider scope of audiences to improve the level of sales rate especially when the match is broadcasted on social media or TV. Another appearing reason is by endorsing the sports, the income of firm’s management is increasing. This could bring benefit to fund operational costs such as providing better facilities for players, helping regular expenses of the management, and paying salary for the employees. Thus, those firms also could meet their employee’s necessities.
On the other hand, this should be also other sectors to endorse. Frist, in this fast-paced era, environmental protection is being a concern of the world because a huge amount of pollution caused by the increasing number of vehicles and industrial areas affects global stability. Due to this, a handsome number of sponsorships should be needed to help save our environment such as eco-friendly campaign, providing more urban green areas and developing new energy to reduce the pollutants. Moreover, education sector plays fundamental sector in society’s life. This sector determines the future of the nation in term of human resource. The better facilities for education are, the higher next human resource quality is. Furthermore, sponsoring education also provides numerous benefits which people could receive. Taken as example, in rural areas, the educational facilities are not well-provided owing to budget limitation so that to improve these facilities, company which is want so spend their money on advertisement should concern on this sector. Hence, not only would firm itself gain more merits to introduce their product but also other people as object could receive them.
In conclusion, it seems to me that companies could expand their advertisement through sports and bring more benefits. This is as long as other sectors such as environment and education sector should be a concern to be provided an endorsement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35537190083 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85426038733 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7629203453 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.315789474 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12118031556 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439774325737 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483204331592 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102673071763 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757703284686 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.