Celebrities like singers, movie stars, or influencers nowadays earn too much. Do you think they deserve what they earn? Explain your answer with relevant examples and/or explanation.
"Celebrities like singers, movie stars, or influencers nowadays earn too much. Do you think they deserve what they earn? Explain your answer with relevant examples and/or explanation."
With the rapid development of technology and people's living standards, entertainment is in high demand, which is why celebrities nowadays earn a massive amount of money. In my opinion, they totally deserve it for various reasons as follows.
To begin with, famous people are not overpaid simply because they have gone through a difficult journey and spent considerable effort before becoming well-known as they are today. It is no doubt that the entertainment industry is fierce and competitive so celebrities have to undergo a long period of training and practice to hone their skills for the competition for stardom. For instance, a majority of K-pop idols has to be a trainee for up to 8 years in order to be chosen and debut. Moreover, despite becoming fairly well-known, celebrities still have to face challenging difficulties such as scandals and aspiring celebrities throughout their careers. In showbiz, people can lose their fame at any time, so they must always try their best to maintain it.
In addition, as music, movies and social network are an indispensable part of people’s everyday lives, famous people like singers, movie stars and influencers are greatly contributing to society. Undeniably, celebrities are successful mainly because people immensely enjoy their works, such as a song, a movie or a short video, which proves their significance in social life. Last but not least, actors, singers and influencers are people with rare talents, for example, great voices, acting abilities, or artistic creativity to produce amazing works. Therefore, they deserve their high earnings with regard to hard work, talents, and determination.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that celebrities are not overpaid. In my view, they are hard-working and determined individuals who have made a significant contribution to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48888888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11065108358 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625396825397 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3430224371 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377327058852 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129739394428 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139363626271 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24684837157 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245085754475 0.056905535591 431% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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