Dear Sir,
I hope you're having a great day. I'm writing to inform you that I wouldn't be able to take the job which I agreed to start over the summer. This is due to some reasons beyond my power.
The test results for the Senior West African school Certificate Examination are out and I passed! This is a special moment in my life because I'm going to further my education. My parents are so excited, although we haven't resumed yet for the first term.
Furthermore, I want to let you know how sorry I am. Please accept my apology. I've been looking forward to this position; we don't mean any harm, whenever an unforseen circumstance of this nature comes up.
Next summer is by the corner, so I'd love to fill up that position as long as it is vacant. If I'll be given a second opportunity to work for you, then I wouldn't miss that spot for anything.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at day. Im writing to inform you that I wouldnt be able to take the job which I agreed ...
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... is a special moment in my life because Im going to further my education. My paren...
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...w sorry I am. Please accept my apology. Ive been looking forward to this position; ...
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...ou at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Adam Grant
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...est. Yours faithfully, Adam Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48850574713 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44955042103 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718390804598 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1632903787 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0833333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204247207042 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672942349327 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816150318518 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111079081908 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846056452064 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.