Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Fashion plays a vital role in today’s world. People of all ages have become fashion-conscious. They prefer wearing branded and trendy clothes as they want to look stylish. Moreover, the selection of clothes entirely depends on an individual’s choice and a change in the way of dressing is definitely a positive impact. This essay will look into the details and weigh if the following fashion is good or bad for society.
There are a myriad of reasons why people prefer wearing trendy clothes. The predominant reason is that they want to stay in the competition, keep up with the modern world, and adjust to society. Moreover, the fashion industry has constantly been growing and releasing unique trends and styles with the help of advertisements, which attracts the attention of the younger generation who spend heavily on such fashionable clothes. According to these youngster’s perception, their personality and character level gels up when they wear fashionable outfits. Such youngsters are always following fashion in each season. Therefore, in order to survive in the competitive rat race of becoming a fashion icon in the fashion world, people wear trendy attires.
Some people suspect that following fashion trends and wearing stylish clothes are not suitable for society. They think that it will have a negative impact on their tradition and culture. But, in reality, it actually depends on the perspective of an individual. In my point of view, it would be apparently wrong to judge a person based on their way of styling and clothing as it’s a personal choice. However, youngsters should avoid spending exorbitant amounts of money purchasing fashionable clothes as the fashion trend changes every now and then.
To reiterate, dressing up according to the latest fashion trend is good until an individual feels confident and comfortable wearing them. Because at the end of the day, fashionable or non-fashionable clothes don’t matter. All that matters is comfort, self-confidence, and relief.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Message: Did you mean 'this youngster' or 'these youngsters'?
Suggestion: this youngster; these youngsters
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.315625 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98027204872 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2174187504 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5263157895 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224632449983 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696214933993 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050800549445 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141299332035 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290330875367 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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