Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, with the development of economy. So many wants to live with a better life condition than and they usually choose to use trendy and fashionable clothes to wear. This is because they like changes in their lifestyle. These clothes can help they be stylish and feel more confident. This essay will look into the details and weigh if the following fashion is good or bad for society.
People have so many reasons to choose wearing trendy clothes. Because people want to stay in trend and keep up with the modern world. Moreover, the fashion brands have growing and releasing so many unique trends and styles with the help of advertisements, which attract the younger generation to spend heavily money on such as fashionable clothes. Therefore, in order to survive in the competitive race of becoming a fashion icon in the fashion world, people wear trendy attires.
On the other hand, some groups of people disagree with people who following trends and wearing branded clothes. The think it has a negative impact to people’s financial if they spend so much money on designer clothes. And it will have a negative impact on traditional and culture. In my point of view, I think whether clothes affect traditional values depends on the person who wearing it. It would be wrong to judge a person on their style and clothes because it is a personal choice.
In conclusion, chasing with the trends and be fashionable is good if people who wear it feel comfortable and confident. Because it doesn't matter whether your clothing is trendy or not. All that matters is confident and comfort.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to wear'.
Suggestion: to wear
... People have so many reasons to choose wearing trendy clothes. Because people want to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing trends and wearing branded clothes. The think it has a negative impact to people’s fi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'feels'?
Suggestion: feels
...shionable is good if people who wear it feel comfortable and confident. Because it d...
^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...l comfortable and confident. Because it doesnt matter whether your clothing is trendy ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87822878229 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57062389083 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5926031486 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7647058824 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248761456178 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770795097393 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549606034355 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150633344223 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426801894146 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to wear'.
Suggestion: to wear
... People have so many reasons to choose wearing trendy clothes. Because people want to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing trends and wearing branded clothes. The think it has a negative impact to people’s fi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'feels'?
Suggestion: feels
...shionable is good if people who wear it feel comfortable and confident. Because it d...
^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...l comfortable and confident. Because it doesnt matter whether your clothing is trendy ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87822878229 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57062389083 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5926031486 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7647058824 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248761456178 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770795097393 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549606034355 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150633344223 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426801894146 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.