Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time doing physical activities
It is sometimes believed that in recent time, education plays an important role in life. Therefore, they spend hours learning at school and home. As a result, there are many parents encourage their children to reduce time to study and participate more in outdoor activities. In this essay I will explain my own ideas.
First and foremost in the modern life as nowadays, education is very necessary for teenagers. This is because many companies recruit employees who have high qualifications in order to serve for them. As a matter of fact , many teenagers spend hours learning in order to have opportunities to go to higher education or universities which can help them to have well-paid jobs after graduation.
On the other hand, there is a number of parents nowadays who encourage their children to take part in more strong activities because it has many benefits. Chief among these is that playing sport can help them to reduce stress after studying. This is driven form that fact that when they play sport, they can have time to live with their passions and this also a chance for them to enjoy the atmosphere. Another point worth mentioning is that playing sports can also allow to them expand their social circles. The reason for this is that they can meet a whole lot of people who have them same passions and they can make friends with them.
On the other hand, there are many sports that require highly team-working spirit which can also allow teenagers to learn and improve their solf skills. Football, for example, it require the highly team-working spirit because there are a lot of team mates, so they have to work and communicate with them effectively in order to win the matches. This skill is also very essential for their future career because in many international companies like nowadays, they have to work with many people around the work, and they have to know how to work effectively.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that knowledge is very crucial for our life as our careers however sport is no less important.
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Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82285714286 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55702727539 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497142857143 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9167730535 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146548807623 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610255211685 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102103572899 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957695233357 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10455960469 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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