These days , it is believed that young people should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in their own country forever .
On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their relations and friends who give them many encouragement when they face difficulty . Young people still reiceve support from their parents when they have troubles , therefore teenagers would not be nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could not have a great development without young people who have a duty to contribute effort for their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability who would contribute a lot for their countryside .
On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of young people want to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunities in modern and advanced country than their countryside where they could not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big companies and large projects which require more and more labour , therefore young people easily find a work and earn a lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often hard-working and have a special talent so they have many positive effects on young people who would imitate and improve themselves daily.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plan for its development 61
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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These days , it is believed that young people should...
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...le should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to so...
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...this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in t...
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...people work in their own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced tha...
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...own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should st...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun encouragement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many encouragements'.
Suggestion: many encouragements
...eir relations and friends who give them many encouragement when they face difficulty . Young peopl...
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... encouragement when they face difficulty . Young people still reiceve support from...
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...om their parents when they have troubles , therefore teenagers would not be nervou...
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... be nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could no...
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... or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could not have a gr...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... contribute effort for their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability who would...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...d contribute a lot for their countryside . On the other hand , it is understa...
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...heir countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of yo...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would hav...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...llenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunit...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... people would have more opportunities in modern and advanced country than their c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...could not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big comp...
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...uld not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big compa...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...jects which require more and more labour , therefore young people easily find a wo...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...a lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn dive...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowled...
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...y if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in dev...
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Suggestion: .
...pend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... imitate and improve themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reaso...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...ove themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support yo...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22535211268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75638267107 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4942318211 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238860301764 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101355578691 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744444572339 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170439199187 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081926619627 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
These days , it is believed that young people should...
^^
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to so...
^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in t...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...people work in their own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced tha...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...own country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should st...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... country forever . On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s should stay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their re...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their relations an...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun encouragement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many encouragements'.
Suggestion: many encouragements
...eir relations and friends who give them many encouragement when they face difficulty . Young peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... encouragement when they face difficulty . Young people still reiceve support from...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...om their parents when they have troubles , therefore teenagers would not be nervou...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... be nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could no...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , The country or city could not have a gr...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... contribute effort for their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability who would...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d contribute a lot for their countryside . On the other hand , it is understa...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...heir countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority ...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...countryside . On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of yo...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would hav...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...llenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunit...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people would have more opportunities in modern and advanced country than their c...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big comp...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld not find suitable environment work . Developed countries have many big compa...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...jects which require more and more labour , therefore young people easily find a wo...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn dive...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...lot of money if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowled...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y if they really aggressive .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in dev...
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Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often h...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... imitate and improve themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reaso...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ove themselves daily. In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support yo...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22535211268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75638267107 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4942318211 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238860301764 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101355578691 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744444572339 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170439199187 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081926619627 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.