In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using mobile phones.
Do you think this will happen one day?
Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
It is believed by some that all transactions can be made online instead of through direct cash payments. I also opine the above as the reasons might not only be the technology development but also the deforestation.
To begin with, Technology has been developing day-to-day, so people are habituated to doing instant beneficiary deeds. Which consumes both time and work. That is why humans show interest to pay online as it reduces the deposit and withdrawal effect. In addition, trees are cutting down exponentially due to industrialization. If there are no trees, there will not be the production of paper, which is the basic raw material for currency notes, for instance, the Institute of Environmental Science and Protection, predicts that half of the globe will be deforested. Within a decade because of the rapid growth of advancements.
However, many people are not willing to give up. Transactions on the. The foremost reason is lack of. Knowledge of technology. As the elderly are not aware of UPI and banking online transactions, they are intended to continue the direct mode of money. Payment, moreover. People who reside in rural areas are not interested to adopt new technology because of online scams, for example, as per the report by cybercrime of London. States that 20,000 online cases were enrolled due to the theft of passports In the year 2022 through Customer care.
To conclude, this essay explained both the above questions and provided suitable examples of each.
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| 2023-02-17 | ielts_tony | 84 | view |
- Many students find it hard to pay attention at school What are the reasons for this What could be done to solve this problem 73
- Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house They just have sent you some holiday photographs Write a letter to your friends In your letter Thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn t write 84
- Your company is going to give a special training course for staff Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre In your letter Give 78
- In the future people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash All payments may have to be made by card or using mobile phones Do you think this will happen one day Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash 56
- Being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...not willing to give up. Transactions on the. The foremost reason is lack of. Knowled...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11885245902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94706899611 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643442622951 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9568543627 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198592604905 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467984975814 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578356828487 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102207147173 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600676021809 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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