One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of individuals believing that masses are naturally born. While others, oppose it by saying team leading skill can be built. In my opinion the lateral apprehension seems to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of arguments in favor of leadership can be developed. The most preponderant one is that with the help of consistency, hard work and determination team leading skill can be made. To elaborate it, in order to become expert at something whether it is leadership skill or any other skill. It only depend on some building blocks that are above mentioned. These cannot only contribute to best leader but also leads to excellent relation between mind and body. Thanks to the wide range of advantages they are offered masses can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with much ease efficacy and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand in one good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help in one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, proper environment and education. This is because in order to build leadership skill if proper education is provided for example the study of political science and other alma matter that related to leadership skill and with the help of giving exams and learn from famous leaders it can be opt. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that leadership can be learned with the help of hard work, consistency and determination and it is crucial and critical for the development of the society.
On the other hand, a section of society contradicts above mentioned views by providing reliable justifications they claim that people are Inheritance leader. To make it justifiable when they born there ancestors was played a role as a leader. Because they get appropriate environment form there childhood to adult life. They started to learn about leadership skill the day when they born. This is because when they started to learn about the study of political. At that time they become expert at it. They already learn about leadership skill. Hence, it is apparent that many people consider it as negatively.
To conclude, despite having some drawbacks, the potential benefits of leadership skill can be developed are indeed too great, to ignore.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...rship skill or any other skill. It only depend on some building blocks that are above ...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...mentioned. These cannot only contribute to best leader but also leads to excellent rela...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...eader. To make it justifiable when they born there ancestors was played a role as a ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ncestors was played a role as a leader. Because they get appropriate environment form t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08857808858 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80478769619 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5337995338 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.30109636 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9583333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272199111297 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670418546504 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557228013375 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146067800353 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173796725355 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...rship skill or any other skill. It only depend on some building blocks that are above ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...mentioned. These cannot only contribute to best leader but also leads to excellent rela...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...eader. To make it justifiable when they born there ancestors was played a role as a ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ncestors was played a role as a leader. Because they get appropriate environment form t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08857808858 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80478769619 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5337995338 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.30109636 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9583333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272199111297 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670418546504 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557228013375 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146067800353 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173796725355 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.